Cycling Through a Storm
I like your use of Max the quirky cat as a sounding board. Clever method of exposition.
Thanks Erick! In the first shitty draft of the scene, Bev was awake and talking. She talks way too much, so I sent her to bed and let Maxwell carry the scene in her place.
One of your best. Are you an expatriate writer now. Like Hemingway?
Temporary expat?
I like your use of Max the quirky cat as a sounding board. Clever method of exposition.
Thanks Erick! In the first shitty draft of the scene, Bev was awake and talking. She talks way too much, so I sent her to bed and let Maxwell carry the scene in her place.
One of your best. Are you an expatriate writer now. Like Hemingway?
Temporary expat?