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Gail's avatar

Aha! I love the foreshadowing of romance. I bet he gets his bike back with a bonus of some sort. 😉 I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

There was an extra “and” in there at some point. I’ll help you by pointing out grammatical errors that I see. Isn’t that nice?

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Erick Reinikka's avatar

I love it that he left his bike in Sequoia's car. We'll see her again.

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